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Thursday, June 11, 2009

Watch your punctuation!

From a travel agency blog:

Our Lanai Stateroom Experience
We stayed in one of the new Lanai staterooms during a week-long Alaska voyage in late May. Essentially, these new category staterooms feature a sliding glass door that opens onto the exterior lower promenade deck that encircles the ship.

Because this covered teak deck is a popular walking venue for guests from all decks, a constant stream of people flows by ... If your clients enjoy people watching, the Lanai stateroom category may be a good choice.


Hmmm. If they enjoy people watching them in their stateroom? How about "people-watching" as a more G-rated punctuation?

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